good morning all,
I am writing regarding the task 2 which done yesterday.
It was an awful experience which I Will pray to GOD not to occur to me or any of my colleges in the actual exam.
I made a lot of mistakes:
* I did not use the planning strategy
* I spent almost 13 minutes on introduction since I did not know what to write.
* I did not colour my writing with some personal experiences, my background, or any events happened in my society.
* I run out of time, and eventually I did not check for any spelling mistake.
to be honest with you I do not deserve more than 5 or 5.5!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
however, I think that I did well ,hopefully, in task one.
please try to avoid these mistakes as much as you can.
now, I am planning to bring the case of writing method again today in the classroom.
and hopefully Mr. Tony will find it a good way and aprove it for IELTS.
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Hmm, hello Khawla, nice to hear from you!
I have just read your essay - I have seen and marked much worse attempts to answer this 'big' question regarding whether capital punishment make us safer and reduces violence.
This question polarises people. They come out for OR against. You were FOR capital punishment and your essay reflected your anguish and doubts concerning the morality of executing criminals.
Your position was NOT crystal clear in the introduction and there lacked evidence to support your views. IELTS respects whatever opinions you have and wants to see a strong argument with relevant examples from your direct personal experience.
It was a helpful, albeit painful, experience to see how such huge topics must be reduced to manageable terms set by YOU, the writer.
Tonight is another story!
Tony
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